Saturday 20 August 2016

Progress shots + FB critique


I put my latest progress on Facebook to get some feedback:
  • Just a suggestion, perhaps more tonal contrast in the background/ foreground? :D
  • i love their mouth so much???? the only thing i'd say is the close hand is kinda not obvious, maybe if it's a slightly different colour?
  • very cool!!! just feel like it needs a bit of shading just where her arm crosses her chest to create depth and perspective. Maybe a gradient so that her blue skin gets darker at the bottom... think about the shadow the box might cast on her skin and maybe the other hand being a slight different colour, and maybe another hand on the right so it doesn't read that she is playing battleships by herself.

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